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Manatee Routs Riverview

The Canes couldn't be stopped Friday night as they defeated Riverview 48-6.

 

Manatee County took the season't first win with a huge score against Sarasota's Riverview.

While last week's game was a nail-biter decided in overtime, on Friday night the Canes came out with a clear message to their opponents and the fans alike.

There would be no stopping them in their march toward victory.

Call me Woody

7:26 pm on Monday, September 12, 2011

This might be the best football game story ever written! I feel like I'm in the front row, seeing for myself the unstoppable march toward victory. I also like the use of sentence fragments for added emphasis. Awesome! Writing! Technique! And I like that the story wasn't bogged down with stats and quotes and all that other junk that "real journalists" use in their stories. This read more like a nice Haiku.

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Toni Whitt

10:12 pm on Monday, September 12, 2011

Hey Woody,
It sounds like you know a lot about sports. Are you following the high school scene? We would love to have you blog on the season of one or all of the Bradenton High Schools.

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